Sunset hues immersed in Oceanic blue,
splashing blaze of colours
on horizon.
Saffron water touching
sea shore
sprinkling golden particles everywhere.
In magnificent show of colours,
captivated by dark & intense beauty of one girl.
Her delicate moves like
beautiful stream flowing in mountain,
making her way through hurdles &
cleansing it with her pure soul.
Her silky & straight hair
shining in glaze of ocean.
Wind blowing through it
like cold breeze in summer.
Lost in a depth of her sapphire blue eyes,
trapped inside by mysterious eyelashes.
Long fingers moved in a rhythmic way
playing magical keys of a piano.
She started picking up sea shells
letting the sand
slip gently through
soft hands.
Keeping what she likes &
leaving something behind.
She tucked few tiny
seashells & pearls
to her silky black dress.
Frills are like sea waves adorned
with silver linings.
Her eyes filled with love
When she touched single big white pearl
of her black chain.
She smiled & that pearl started glowing brightly
killing darkness around.
This pearl seems to be special & favorite as
she Keeps it very close to heart.
Twirling elegantly to the rhythm
of her music,
frills from the bottom started to rise.
white sand, sparkles & pearls
formed white aura on all her sides.
She was getting brighter with every turn.
Like a dark angel
dancing in fairyland.
As beautiful as flower
blooming in the sunlight.
She stopped & raised her hands
sparkles filled the sky.
Glitters shined like a zillion diamondsfew started to fall apart.
Tried to catch but disappeared soon
when I raise my hands.
Feeling so calm & peaceful,
I drown into her blissful paradise.
When I opened my eyes she is gone
along with her magic.But I know
Hey Night ,
My heart will beat for you
when sun goes down.
Waiting for you at
seashore is my passion.
Don’t know when I’ll catch falling star
for my empty pendant
but watching you in silence is
comfort to my heart…….
This beautiful painting is done by my dear daughter Antara which really inspired me to write on dark beauty of nightπβπ . She is sparkle girl to me , adding sparkles to cards,painting & our life.π«π« Thanks to herπ
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What a beautiful expression! You write so well.
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Thanks for your lovely words. Have a great day!
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Beautiful expression
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Thank you friendπ
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Your words have painted a beautiful imagery Bhavana. Your daughterβs painting is super cute π
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I’m so glad you think so, Radhika. Your words always encourage me. Thanks for being so kind & supportive.
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My pleasure dear βΊοΈ
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Bhavanaβ¦.You are just amazingβ€Loads of love
.
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Appreciate you stopping by Rida. Much loveπ
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Beauty β€
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Thanks Nikhita.
I tried many times to check your blog but having same problem which I had last time.
I don’t know if I’m facing tjis issue … u plz check with your other blogger friend are they having same issue when they clicked your pic?
Check setting of your profile , I guess you might have entered wrong link to your website.
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Yeahβ¦ the link was wrongβ¦ I fixed it!!Thanks for the adviceπ
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That’s great. Really happy that I could help you.
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Beautifully penned down. You have a knack for poetry.
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This is huge compliment for me. Many thanks Sanskriti. π
Still learning to express myself better in poetry.
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You are actuallly best in poetry.
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Omg Shreya…look I’m blushing here ππ. Many Thanks dear you made my day.
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hahaa!
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Well written!
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Thanks Shreyaπ
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You have captured the imagination of your daughter with an equally beautiful poem, Bhavana.
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These words are like music to my ears. Thank you Pranitha for taking the time to read my posts.π
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It was absolutely my pleasure, Bhavana
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Hey Bhavana. The imagery is so beautiful. Could actually picture the girl and your daughterβs painting fits the poem in itβs own cute way.
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Thanks Smitha. So delighted you enjoyed reading it. How are you?
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Beautifully worded ββ
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Thanks dearβ
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Your daughter is so talented and my eyes were glued to the beautifully innocent imagery. The poetry weaved and beautifully described a free-spirited girl.
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Appreciate you stopping by Vishal.
Your kind words put a big smile on my face. Thanks
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Nice one
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Heyyy!
I have nominated you for the mystery blog award. click here for more information. https://liveoutcrazy.wordpress.com/2018/01/21/liebster-award-2/
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Thanks Shreyaππ for nominating me, I’m honoured . Sure I’ll check it out.
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Sry libster award
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Beautifully written
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Appreciate your kind words, Vikram.
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Hello Bhavana!! Itβs so amazing to have personified the night as the girl on the seashoreβ¦.Simple yet so profound!!
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Thanks Riddhima!
Your lovely words are music to my ears. So happy you enjoyed reading it.
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Hi Bhavana, that post you saw was a slipβ¦do check out my previous post.. youβll understandβ¦it was the after-effectπ
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Your daughterβs painting and your words touched me very much. Thank you.
Best wishes,
Tanja
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Hey Tanja thanks!
Appreciate you stopping by β
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Beautifully expressed and loved the painting with a beautiful penned word.π
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Many thanks Rudra for your lovely feedback. π
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Youβre most welcome. π
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Beautiful canvas ! Wonderful composition !!
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Full of passion… I love it!
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A beautiful touch of art that reaches the heart. truly this was fulfilling
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Your words are truly inspiring. Glad you stopped by
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have a fun friday and great weekend
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The painting completes the poem, Bhavana. That is so beautiful π
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I’m so pleased to know you liked it. Thanks Neha
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My pleasure, Bhavana π
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You ma’am are gifted … with creative talent. Your designs are indeed colorful.
Thanks n regards ππ
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Gratitude ππ»… you really made my day by kind words.
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