Hi friends ….Today while cleaning drawers I found single, unused white crayon in empty boxย so thought of writing down its emotions on pape. Hope you like it.
Disclaimer- I am not sad or emotional writer, love happy stories, happy endings ๐. ย I like all colours including white.
Through the eyes of a White Crayon
I am unique,divine & proud of my purity,
My 11 friendsย who were my reflection but having different identity,
Spreading colour was only our purpose
Excited in that confined box no idea about outside world
One day door of our destiny opened by tiny fingers
My friends were picked one by one
Outside giggles made me more anxious
I left alone, waiting for my turn
My friends returned but not my reflections,
They were broken, ย peeled & thrashed
But all happy as their purpose was served
Days passed I stood alone, sad & untouched
After many days I was suddenly picked up,
Saw my friends imprints on
papers,walls & minds
Horrified when I was thrown out of window,
took my last breath & left permanent mark on the road.
ยฉ2017 Bhavana Colourfulcanvas, All Rights Reserved.
‘What would the white crayon think?’ I love your creativity. Its a fascinating post๐
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Hey Thanks dear….yes white crayon always unused and unwanted in the box….so tried to express it…I am pleased u liked it
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Great story of a little guy!
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Appreciate your kind words…Thanks
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Wow Bhavana, your blogs are really awesome and this one is so insightful ๐. I loved the title of this post so much !! Have a nice day ahead ๐
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Thanks for visiting and liking my blogs.This comment made my dayโบ . Hope you have a nice day too.
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Nice one
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Thanks for stopping byโบ
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Welcome
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I adore your creativity, what a fantastic little idea. How heartbreaking – you made me feel sad for a crayon!! You write beautifully – love your blog x
Abby – http://www.seafoaming.com
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Thank you for kind words…so glad u liked it..
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Your blog title and the posts are perfect. So bright and colorful. This poem on the white crayon has so much meaning.
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Thanks!!..it means a lot to me..I’m happy that you enjoyed it.๐
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Loved this Bhavana!
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Thanks Angela๐
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White crayon symbolises a girl’s inner feelings.. isn’t it?? Untouched and pureโค
Well its just how i look at it๐
Your post was amazing and deep..i loved itโค
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Thanks for your kind words…everyone has a different interpretation & I liked yours…girls feelings so true….filled with so many emotions…and we girls are full of life , spreading colours everywhere.
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gud 1๐
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Thanks for stopping by
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Hahahaha
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That was some good ๐ imagination..
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really fascinating creativity, i mean who could think of crayons as a basis for a poem.
great work
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Thank you..that means a lot, coming from you.
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My white crayon is the only one out of my newest box… removed this weekend so that my boyfriend could use it for truck work. Sometimes, white crayons get to have all the fun! Just not often. This post made me smile. Thanks for checking out my blog and inspiring me to find yours. All the best!
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Glad that you enjoyed it..Thanks for stopping by & best wishes to you too
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That’s very creative of you.. imagining and writing the feelings of a white crayon.. wow . ๐
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Thanks Mona
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wow…beautifully penned ๐โค
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Thanks a lot!
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Very creative one. ๐White crayon isnโt useless always. A tip. Draw something using white crayon and paint the paper with blue ink. The white drawing stands out. ๐
Good post and keep up the work. ๐
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Thanks for feedback & special tip..sure I ll try it
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Lovely post
You possess great imagination.
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Thanks dear…it means a lot to me
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Reblogged this on Sketches By Nitesh.
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Thanks a lot!
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Nice. Even when I was a kid I used to womder why they keep white crayon when I can’t do anything with it in my white drawing book. My white crayon also would have had similar feeling of that one tou found๐ฌ
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Glad that you can relate this to your childhood memories really white crayon is rarely used as compared to other colors but always there in the box.
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Really true white colour adds a lot to the meaning to other colours and in life !! Lovely thought
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Appreciate your feedback
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Hi Bhavana, I have nominated you for the Leibster Award. Check it out here. . https://yuvisbuzz.wordpress.com/2017/08/26/leibster-award/
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Congrats YuviโฆWish you many more awards. So glad to know more about you . Keep posting, would love to read more about your passion. Thanks a lot for nominating me. Double excited asย It’sย second nominationย for me in a week. I’m honored. I’ ll get to it asap.
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Thanks a lot dear! I’d love to know more about you too. I will look forward to reading your postsโบ
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Amazing, I never thought about the feeling of a white crayon .. I just always complain to manufacturers in my head that why they made white crayon- I am guilty today after reading ur post that I never think about his feelings ๐๐ญ๐ฉ๐ชyour creative post made me super emotional about it.. thank you so much for talking for it๐ข๐ข..I just love โค๏ธ the way you wrote about its feelings , it’s short and sweet ..I can’t read long writings that plus for me– if you don’t mind can I share your post on my page so my friends can read this lovely postโค๏ธโค๏ธfrom now on I will have my son to use the white crayon first ๐น๐น
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Thanks for interpreting it so nicely…I’m glad you could relate to it & feel it. White crayon can be used in many ways & now onwards it won’t be neglected ๐๐. Yes dear, you can share it , My pleasure.
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It’s just so beautifully creative!
Have a good day, Charu ๐ป๐๐
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Thanks for visiting and liking it.
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โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ Welcome
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Ah the nostalgic white crayon โ Iโll definitely always cherish the memories I had of it in my crayon box when I was small. Thanks for sharing such a lovely post! Looking forward to your next one ๐
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Glad this post refreshed your childhood memories. Thanks for your kind words.
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True! I am sure this poem brought back memories of childhood not just for me, but for everyone who read it. ๐ It made me smile to remember the days I used to make effort to use that untouched white crayon. It always disturbed me how that was the least used crayon.
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So beautiful! Very creative
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Thanks! Glad you liked it
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Your creativity level is too damn high. Commendable work ๐ ๐. In love with your blog.๐
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Thanks Swati for appreciating my work. I’m not writer at heart, being surrounded by so many talented writers, this is small effort to express my feelings. Glad you liked it. Much love
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Such a creative post.๐
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Thanks Jeni for stopping by. Appreciate your kind words ๐
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